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⟦145b22c16⟧ Wang Wps File

    Length: 19199 (0x4aff)
    Types: Wang Wps File
    Notes: CPS/ECP/015               
    Names: »1390A «

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└─⟦c9afadba6⟧ Bits:30006061 8" Wang WCS floppy, CR 0093A
    └─ ⟦this⟧ »1390A « 

WangText




…02…CPS/ECP/015

…02…KR/811013…02……02…#
PROPOSED CHANGES TO ICD/001 ISSUE 3.3
…02…                                                     CAMPS








                      1̲ ̲ ̲C̲O̲S̲T̲ ̲I̲M̲P̲A̲C̲T̲

         None, regarding these changes.



                    2̲ ̲ ̲S̲C̲H̲E̲D̲U̲L̲E̲ ̲I̲M̲P̲A̲C̲T̲

         None, regarding these changes.



                   3̲ ̲ ̲P̲R̲O̲P̲O̲S̲E̲D̲ ̲C̲H̲A̲N̲G̲E̲S̲

         Please see list of changes 1 to 81 overleaf. In addition
         there will be consequencial changes to revision record
         and table of contents.




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 1         14             4th. line from bottom:  Change
                          slash to space.

 2         19             Section 2.3.5.7:  Insert commas
                          around "part of which is currently
                          on the VDU-screen".

 3         22             Sec. 3.1.4:  "identification"
                          mispelled.

 4         37,50,62,      To become more readable, the
                          transaction
           73,94,98,      ID should be 21 characters
                          instead of 20
           101,110,114,   characters e.g.:  
           117,119,121a,  ABC678290950Z MAR 81 (20 char)
           133            ABC678 290950Z MAR 81 (21
                          char)

 5         30             The headline and the COMMAND
                          column should be in accordance
                          with the format on page 125.

 6         31, 42         It should be indicated that
                          the entry of data in format
                          A-3 is terminated by depression
                          of the ENTER key.

 7         32, 37         At the start of New Message
                          Preparation, the system will
                          display message type = 0.
                          Insert section 3.4.1.1.a
                          "M̲e̲s̲s̲a̲g̲e̲ ̲T̲y̲p̲e̲
                          The system will output message
                          type equal to zero.  Refer
                          to section 3.9"
                          and update page 37.

 8         34, 48, 110,   Local distribution of outgoing
                          messages 
           144            will result in a maximum of
                          10 copies.  (ref. SRS 3.4.1.1.1.j,
                          changed by DN no. 4 to Preliminary
                          Design of MDP-package).

                          A̲c̲t̲i̲o̲n̲:

                          Page 34:  Sec. 3.4.1.9 Change
                          "10 provided" to "max. 10".



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                          Page 48:  Sec. 3.6.1.3, Local
                          Distribution, should read:

                          "As for format A.  There are
                          a maximum of 10 entry fields."
                          (delete the rest).

                          Page 144:  Change "LOCAL DISTN
                          INFO" to "LOCAL DISTN".  Change
                          syntax to "(3A)10".

                          Page 110:  Update to show
                          that Coordination should be
                          related to a maximum of 10
                          SCDs.

                          Page 110:  Update to show
                          that Local Distribution is
                          indicated by up to 10 SCDs.

                          This change no. (8) is also
                          referenced by change no. 17.

 9         35, 38         Action addressees are optional
                          (ref. SRS 3.2.1.2.1.1.1.b.5).
                          Page 35, sec. 3.4.1.11.1:
                           Change:  
                          "T̲o̲ ̲A̲c̲t̲i̲o̲n̲ ̲(̲M̲a̲n̲d̲a̲t̲o̲r̲y̲)̲ 
                          The user should ...."
                          to
                          "T̲o̲ ̲A̲c̲t̲i̲o̲n̲ ̲(̲O̲p̲t̲i̲o̲n̲a̲l̲)̲
                          The user may ....."

                          Page 38:  Change field descriptor
                          "D" to "d".

 10        35             9th. line:  Change "error
                          2" to "error 9".  ref. page
                          145.

 11        35             11th. line:  Change "MDCO"
                          to "MSO"

 12        35             Sec. 3.4.1.11.2:  Add:  "Either
                          one ACTION or one INFO addressee
                          is mandatory".

 13        35             Sec. 3.4.1.13:  Add:  "The
                          format of an exercise SIC
                          is 3 alpha characters.  The
                          first is "A", the second is
                          in the range E to Z and the
                          third is in the range A to
                          Z.


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 14        36             7th. line:  Change "The" to
                          "For"

 15        36, 145        Sec. 3.4.1.15:  Add:  "If
                          "EXER/" is entered and no
                          exercise SIC is entered, then
                          error 34 is displayed".

                          Add to page 145:  
                          "34.  No exercise SIC(s) specified".

 16        37, 50         Originator ID is alphanumeric.
                           Change field descriptor "A"
                          to "D" on pages 37 and 50.

 17        37, 50         In entry fields (as opposed
                          to display fields) of local
                          distribution SCDs, only 10
                          fields are required (ref.
                          8) and need not be repeatable.
                           Remove "R" from page 37 and
                          50.

 18        38             EXER/OPER should be optional.
                           Change "D" to "d".

 19        41             The text field is repeatable.
                           Insert "R".

 20        42, 145        Append to page 42:
                          "On completion of a), if some
                          of the specified coordination
                          SCDs cannot be reached, then
                          the system will identify these
                          SCDs by a display in the response
                          line.
                          If b) is unsuccessful, i.e.
                          if the release position cannot
                          be reached, then system response
                          message 33 will be returned
                          in the response line."

                          Page 145:  Insert error message
                          33:  
                          33.  Release terminal cannot
                          be reached.



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 21        43             The types of input to format
                          A-3 should be clarified. 
                          Replace the coordinate, release,
                          and defer lines with respectively:

                          COORDINATE (y)   a
                          RELEASE    (y)   a
                          DEFER      (y)   a

 22        43, 44         To conform with the format
                          of user retrieval by command,
                          the (TIMESTAMP and ITEM REF.
                          ID) should be replaced with
                          (ITEM TYPE, TIME STAMP, ITEM
                          REF. ID. and STAFF CELL) in
                          that order.

                          The change applies to format
                          A-3 page 43 and to lines 10
                          and 11 of page 44.

 23        44             Format A-4 does not exist.
                           Delete "- A-4" in headline
                          of section 3.5 page 44.

 24        44             Insert the following after
                          line 19:

                          "If the reference is invalid,
                          then format A-3 is presented
                          for the user".

 25        44             Insert after the last section
                          of 3.5.1:
                          "If the referenced message
                          is in the off-line data base,
                          then the main menu will be
                          presented and a notification
                          will be placed in the System
                          Response queue when the append
                          is completed".

 26        44             Page 44 line 4 from bottom:
                          Change "to non-existent" to
                          "to a non-existent".

 27        48             Distribution to CCIS and SCARS
                          should not be included in
                          this format at the present
                          stage.
                          Line 4:  Remove ",CCIS and
                          SCARS".  Delete the last two
                          lines.

 28        48             Sec. 3.6.1:  Delete "(Refer
                          to section 6)".



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 29        49             REPEAT is not a valid command.
                           Delete "REPEAT/" in line
                          4 of page 49.

           54             Page 54 line 4 and 5:  Change
                          "..has already been started
                          and deferred.." to "..was
                          suspended, deferred...".

 30        54             The use of format C1-1 should
                          be explained.
                          7th. line:  Change:  "The
                          user inserts the item reference
                          identity only of the message
                          in the command line." to the
                          following:  "The user inserts
                          the command in the command
                          line and format C1-1 will
                          be presented.  The user may
                          also insert both the command
                          and the item reference identity
                          and the message will be presented."

 31        54             Insert after line no. 10:
                           "(i.e. trailing space-lines
                          will be removed)"

 32        57             The use of format G1-1 should
                          be explained.  Lines 5 and
                          6:
                          Change "The item reference
                          identity is inserted in the
                          command line" to the following:
                           "The user inserts the command
                          in the command line and format
                          G3-1 will be presented.  The
                          user may also insert both
                          the command and the item reference
                          identity and the message will
                          be presented".

 33        70             There is no format P1-2. 
                          Delete this in figure 3.10-1
                          and change "P1-1" to "P1".

 34        70, 71, 73     TOC is required in reference
                          to make it unique
                          Page 70:  Change "ENTER REFERENCE"
                          to "ENTER TIME-STAMP, REFERENCE".
                          Page 71, after line 9:  Insert:
                           "3.10.1 Time Stamp (mandatory)"
                          and renumber old sections
                          3.10.1, 3.10.2 and 3.10.2
                          and update page 73.



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 35        71             Clarification of the use of
                          format P1 is needed.  Page
                          71 after line 7:  Insert:
                           "The user inserts the command
                          in the command line and format
                          P1 will be presented.  The
                          user may also insert both
                          the command and the parameters,
                          and the message will be deleted.

 36        74,77,80,82,   Change the names of formats
                          H-1 to H-7 to 
           84,86,88,90    more descriptive names namely
                          H-menu, H-R and H-D, H-I,
                          H-L, H-C, H-N and H-CAT

 37        76             In accordance with anticipated
                          changes of SRS sec. 3.2.7.2,
                          the following changes to page
                          76 should be made:

                          Lines 1 to 3, delete "In the
                          case where a specific Time
                          of occurrence (TOC) is specified,
                          then the first item which
                          fits the reference will be
                          retrieved and presented".
                          Replace it with:

                          "If several items fit the
                          keys, a catalogue of these
                          items will be displayed. 
                          If just one item fits the
                          keys, then this item will
                          be displayed."
                          Delete lines 6,7, and 8.

 38        77,80,82,84,   Insert TRANSACTION ID (21
                          chars.) in the 
           86,88,90       screen formats on pages 77,80,82,84,86,88,
                          and 90.

 39        77             It should be possible to choose
                          a retrieval format by entering
                          the item type in the retrieval
                          menu screen format.

 40        77             Replace "Command Parameter"
                          with "ITEM TYPE".  Delete
                          the RETV-column.  Add a line
                          for draft messages and interchange
                          the type column with the text
                          column.



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 41        79             Insert after line 6:
                          "On completion of the off-line
                          retrieval, the retrieved item
                          or response message is placed
                          in the system response queue".

 42        79             Delete lines 9 and 10 ("If
                          the entry .....1 is returned").

 43        80,82,84,      Page 80 format H-2 should
                          be replaced
           86,88,90       with Page 80a format H-R Fig.
                          3.11-3 and Page 80b format
                          H-D Fig. 3.11-4.  The figures
                          of pages 82, 84, 86, 88, and
                          90 should be renumbered accordingly.

 44        80,82,84,      Date Time Group should consist
                          of 11 
           90,98,121c     characters, e.g. 081130Z APR.

 45        80             Include Originating HQ as
                          retrieval key on page 80a
                          ref. sec. 3.11.2.1.4.

 46        81,82          TOC is not mandatory but either
                          TOC or DTG is mandatory.
                          Add after 4th line, page 81:
                           "Either TOC or DTG is mandatory,
                          but both should be entered
                          if known".  Headline of sec.
                          3.11.3.1, page 81.
                          Change "Mandatory" to "Optional".
                           Change on page 82 the Timestamp
                          field descriptor from "D"
                          to "d"

 47        82,84          The field length of ORIGINATING
                          HQ should be changed to 60
                          characters on pages 82 and
                          84.

 48        83,84          It has been discussed whether
                          SCD or PLA should be used
                          in section 3.11.4.3.  In accordance
                          with anticipated update of
                          SRS page 208, the PLA shall
                          be used.  No change to pages
                          83 and 84 on this account.

 49        87             Originating Staff Cell is
                          mandatory.  Update headline
                          of section 3.11.6.3



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 50        88             Include item reference ID
                          as retrieve key in the screen
                          layout (ref. ICD/001 sec.
                          3.11.6.2).

 51        89             In accordance with anticipated
                          change to SRS sec. 3.2.7.2,
                          a catalogue will be displayed
                          if and only if several items
                          fit the retrieval keys.

                          Page 89, 2nd. line:  change
                          "If a time window is specified"
                          to "If several items fit the
                          retrieval keys".

 52        89             In accordance with anticipated
                          change to SRS page 208, the
                          ICD/0001 section 3.11.7.4
                          should read:
                          "3.11.7.4 O̲r̲i̲g̲i̲n̲a̲t̲o̲r̲
                          For incoming, released outgoing
                          and locally distributed outgoing
                          messages, this is the PLA
                          reference number of the originating
                          HQ.  For items of type C,
                          N and D, it is the SCD of
                          the originator.".

 53        92,93,94,95    The item reference identity
                          of the release notification
                          should be given for:
                          Released Messages
                          Messages not accepted for
                          Release
                          Messages Deferred for Release.
                          This leads to the following
                          updates:
                          Page 92:  Replace line 11
                          with "message, the Originating
                          Staff Cell and the Item Reference
                          Identity of the release notification".

                          Page 93:  Replace line 3 with
                          "Item Reference Identity,
                          the Originating Staff Cell
                          and the Item Reference Identity
                          of the release notification."

                          Page 93:  Replace line 6 with:
                          "Item Reference Identity,
                          the Originating Staff Cell
                          and the Item Reference Identity
                          of the release notification."



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                          Pages 94 and 95:  Update accordingly.

 54        92,97          The periodic print outs should
                          be specified in the following
                          way (ref. SRS 3.2.3.6):
                          Page 92 line 6:  Change "to
                          the supervisor" to "at hour
                          00.00 that day".

                          Page 97 line 6:  Change "to
                          the supervisor" to "at hour
                          00.00 that day"

 55        92             Sec. 3.12.4  Messages can
                          be suspended during continue
                          message preparation too. 
                          Change the headline of section
                          3.12.4 to:
                          "Messages Suspended during
                          Preparation".

 56        92,95          Messages for which defer is
                          requested should be included
                          in the outgoing message status.

                          Append new section 3.12.4.1
                          on page 92.

                          "3.12.4.1  M̲e̲s̲s̲a̲g̲e̲s̲ ̲D̲e̲f̲e̲r̲r̲e̲d̲

                                     The system gives
                          the Time Stamp
                                     allocated when
                          the messages were
                                     deferred, the Item
                          Reference
                                     Identity and the
                          Originating 
                                     Staff Cell".
                          Page 95:  Insert DEFERRED
                          MESSAGES in the screen layout
                          N-2.

 57        92,95          Messages awaiting append should
                          be included in the outgoing
                          message status.

                          Page 92:  Append new sec.
                          3.12.4.2:

                          "3.12.4.2  M̲e̲s̲s̲s̲a̲g̲e̲s̲ ̲A̲w̲a̲i̲t̲i̲n̲g̲
                          ̲A̲p̲p̲e̲n̲d̲

                                     The system gives
                          the Time Stamp
                                     allocated when
                          the append was 
                                     initiated, the
                          Item Reference
                                     Identity and the
                          Originating 
                                     Staff Cell".



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                          Page 95:
                          Insert MESSAGES AWAITING APPEND
                          in format N-2

 58        93             Change last line of section
                          3.12.8 page 93 to:
                          "since the previous periodic
                          status message, i.e. messages
                          retrievable in either draft
                          or released version.

 59        93             Comments for which defer is
                          requested should be included
                          in section 3.12.9.

                          Page 93 sec. 3.12.9.  Change
                          "suspended" to "suspended
                          or deferred".

 60        93             Clarification is needed as
                          to when a comment is prepared.
                          Page 93, append to old section
                          3.12.10: ", i.e. number of
                          comments sent."

 61        93,95          To conform with what is the
                          case for messages, the following
                          categories should be included
                          in format N-2:

                          Comments Sent and Comments
                          Deleted since Previous Status
                          Message.
                          Page 93:  Change old sec.
                          no. 3.12.10 to 3.12.12.
                          Page 93:  Insert new section
                          3.12.10:

                          "3.12.10  C̲o̲m̲m̲e̲n̲t̲s̲ ̲S̲e̲n̲t̲
                                    This lists the Item
                                    Reference Identity
                                    and Originating
                                    Staff Cells of comments
                                    which are sent."



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                          Page 93   Insert new section
                                    3.12.11.

                          "3.12.11  C̲o̲m̲m̲e̲n̲t̲s̲ ̲D̲e̲l̲e̲t̲e̲d̲
                          ̲s̲i̲n̲c̲e̲ ̲P̲r̲e̲v̲i̲o̲u̲s̲ ̲
                                    S̲t̲a̲t̲u̲s̲ ̲M̲e̲s̲s̲a̲g̲e̲

                                    This lists the Item
                                    Reference Identity
                                    and Originating
                                    Staff Cells of comments
                                    which are deleted.
                          Page 95 format N-2:
                          Add these two categories to
                          the screen format.

 62        95             "FURTHER" is mispelled in
                          "Comments awaiting further
                          Preparation"

 63        97             The Time Stamp assigned to
                          an incoming message does not
                          necessarily give the time
                          of reception in the CAMPS
                          system (as it may have been
                          subject to MDCO assistance).
                          
                          Page 97, sec. 3.13.1:
                          Delete "Receipt of the Message
                          in CAMPS".

 64        107            Due to design considerations,
                          CR wants to move the time
                          specification for previous
                          submission from the terminal
                          header to be part of the user
                          area (equal to the original
                          layout for format D). Change
                          lines 9 to 11 to: "FOR RELEASE(R)
                          for a message for which release
                          is required. (R) will read
                          "REPEAT" when the message
                          previously has been sent for
                          release.

 65        107            Change header of section 4.2
                          (ref.:  CPS/101/tlx/0336 and
                          CAMPS telex log no. 340).
                          It should read:
                          DISPLAY FORMAT FOR MESSAGES
                          FOR COORDINATION, MESSAGES
                          FOR RELEASE, LOCAL DISTRIBUTION
                          OF OUTGOING MESSAGES BASED
                          ON SCDs AND BASED ON LOCAL
                          PLAs



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 66        107,110,113,   Insert "DATE TIME GROUP" as
                          a field in 
           114            figure 4.2-1 and figure 4.3-1
                          and as text in section 4.2.3.1
                          and section 4.3.3.1.

 67        110,114,117    Field length for Special Handling
                          and Message Handling Instruction
                          should be 69 characters.
                          Update pages 110, 114 and
                          117.

 68        110            Figure 4.2-1:
                          The sequence of the fields,
                          Message Handling Instruction
                          and Precedence Action/Info,
                          should be changed.  The sequence
                          of the fields, Coordination
                          and Originator SCD/ID should
                          be changed.

 69        113,114        Old section 4.3.8 and the
                          last line on page 114 should
                          read:  "Format lines 6 to
                          13 of the received message".

 70        132            Release notifications should
                          be included in the Message
                          Release Status.
                          Page 132 sections 5.4.2, 5.4.3
                          and 5.4.4:  Change "and originating
                          Staff Cell" to ",Originating
                          Staff Cell and Item Reference
                          Identity of the Release Notification".

 71        132,133        Page 132, sec. 5.4.5 should
                          read:
 
                          "5.4.5    T̲o̲t̲a̲l̲ ̲N̲u̲m̲b̲e̲r̲

                                    This gives the total
                                    number of messages
                                    for which a release
                                    decision has been
                                    taken since the
                                    last periodic report.

                          Page 133:  Change "Totals
                          Submitted" to "Total Number".

 72        133            A column for the Item Ref.
                          ID of the release notification
                          should be included in format
                          Q.



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 73        141            Precedence Long Form:
                          Syntax is "14A"
                          Semantics should include "(SUPER
                          FLASH)" and "(SUPER PRIORITY)"

 74        141            Classification Long Form:
                          Syntax is "18A"

 75        142            Message Handling Instructions
                          Short Form:  Syntax is 3X.

 76        142            Transaction ID:  Include space
                          in syntax between "Serial
                          Number of Transaction" and
                          "Timestamp".

 77        143            Time Stamp:  YEAR, syntax
                          is "2N"

 78        113,114        Insert Message Handling Instruction
                          as a field in Fig. 4.3-1 and
                          as text in section 4.3.5.1.

 79        107,108,109,   Renumber the subsections of
                          section 4.2, 
           113,115,116    4.3 and 4.4

 80        145            Page 145, no. 23:  Delete
                          "/"

 81        146            Include "Precedence" as parameter
                          for the "RELEASE" function.